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[NG Advice]

Two things:

In comedy, there is something called the "rule of threes". For this movie, it would mean that "cock joke" was funny the first three times, but not the fourth or the fifth in the credits.

Secondly, it's "P.P.S.", not "P.S.S.". The "post" in P.S. means it's after everything, so you want it to say it's after the post you already made, so you would say post-post script, not post script script. Get it?

Nevertheless, I enjoyed the movie. Great idea, and good animation.

TheCriminalDuder responds:

I knew about the P.P.S. thing I did the PSS thing to add to the stupidity of the joke.

"rules of threes" I'll remember that. Thanks for the advice.

[Afrobot (Loop)]

Very good for a first submission!

That's some excellent FBF animation, and I loved the senselessness of the plot...or lackthereof. The song was cool, too. I'm sure people are going to want more of a plot or something a little longer for your future submissions. Also, the whole "LOL" thing is kind of a turn-off.

SuperMelty responds:

Thanks. :) I know, I don't like the "LOL" thing much either, but it started out animating that, and just evolved. My next submission will definitely have a plot, but I'm working on getting better at flash now.

[-Duel-]

That's very good for a first Flash!

I liked the ending the best. "I rule." I say that all the time....
Also, I liked the idea of one having a gun and the other a katana. The animation was excellent, and it didn't have a plot. I like when things don't have a plot every once in a while.

Michael-White responds:

Glad you liked it.

And yeah, I specifically chose not to have a plot. I see a lot of people making great animations with stories that do not do the rest of it justice. I just wanted to practice doing animation on its own.

[untitled flash project!]

I really enjoyed it.

First things first, the graphics in this movie are horrid. Very, very choppy, and you can tell what was added in by Flash (cough, mouths, cough) and what wasn't. The sound...the sound...I hated the music, though that doesn't make it poorly added, so do deduction on score due to my music tastes. But, the voice acting was sub-par. Though, the movie was quite funny, and I liked the Requiom For a Dream (spelling?) reference in there. Plus, it really kept me interested the whole way through. On that note, it was quite long. That is a good thing. I hope to see the sequel.

cutaia responds:

Definitely was a "Requiem" reference. All your points are definitely valid, but don't expect them to improve much...I do kinda suck after all.

And hey...we're just lucky the mouths moved at all. :)

[Crossed Sword Compilation]

Hm...

It was pretty good. I liked the beginning. The animation was alright, and I liked the relation between the head color of the first sticks and the background of when it showed the close-ups. I also liked the inclusion of Cloud and Sephiroth, if that was them. Oh, and a quick question, in case you reply to this:
Is the music FROM Kill Bill, or did it only get popular from being in Kill Bill?

lupedog responds:

it was a song before, is just got popular after Kill Bill, if you click on the buy it part of this page you can see his other stuff

[The Lunargirl]

I liked it.

It was very good. The animation was great, and i liked the story. But the kid is a dumbass. If a girl was named "lunargirl", my first impulse wouldnt be to fly (somehow) to the moon. Anyway, i liked it. But it was nothing outstanding (besides the graphics).

mrsimon responds:

The assignment was all about the graphics, so I'm glad you enjoyed the essential part of the flash :)